A loose jointed fella called Freddie McLane
swivelled his head after snorting cocaine
but this was quite dumb
‘cause the smell from his bum
made him swivel it all the way back round again
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Good fun, Michael.
My quick contribution (I failed with the humour bit - I'm sorry!):
Young Peter needled himself in the arse
His first try at smack but we’ll let that pass
Now he was just beginning
To find his road to ruin:
Veins were better until they became sparse….
Nice one DD
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles tried this?! lol
She hasn't got the neck.
such a striking image!
I couldn't help but react viscerally
move back, frowning
then eventually, peer ever-closer
wondering...
I just love your art, dear poet
thank you!
hope you're staying cool
lol
I actually love the heat - had an apartment in Paphos for many years and I guess I just got used to it. Pleased you like the artwork.
Good is this rhyme dear Mike - A chuckle a minute with your clever limerick..
Keep off the mushrooms Fay. 😁😁
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