I Dreamt

Bella Shepard

I dreamt I was lost

And when I woke I was found

But where had I been?

 

 

  • Author: Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 21st, 2022 08:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a little whimsy.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 39
  • Users favorite of this poem: Paul Bell, Teddy.15
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  • orchidee

    Good write Bella.

  • Bella Shepard

    Thank you my friend, I'm still looking, haven't checked every nook and cranny yet.

  • Neville


    now there's a conundrum and a predicament for ya ..
    and it all becomes perfectly clear, size aint everything, is it 🙂

  • Fay Slimm.

    Something to deeper ponder in those final words - -- short but telling that million-dollar question dear Bella. A brilliant three liner.

    • Bella Shepard

      Thank you dear Fay for those kind words. I sometimes wonder these days, if I even know what I'm saying. It's good to have friends who can help me figure it out at times.

    • lalalaEulalie

      I love the in between consciousness and sleep. The piece is a tad haunting and I love it! 💎

      • Bella Shepard

        Thank you so much for reading, and for your kind words.

      • Goldfinch60

        Good words Bella, that happens to all of us sometimes.

        Andy

        • Bella Shepard

          Thank you dear Andy, your comments are always appreciated. I find little slips of consciousness are a tad bit more frequent these days, but that's OK. I find this wonderful site keeps me thinking and sharing with wonderful friends, and that is a treasure.

        • Paul Bell

          This could be an out-of-body experience, maybe a bit of flatlining.
          I do like the out-of-the-box, mind you.

          • Bella Shepard

            Thank you my friend for your intuitive comment. The funny thing is, the older I get the more I wonder about where I've been, especially when I'm awake. lol
            Thank you for the fav.

          • sorenbarrett

            This to me is an ideal haiku, although maybe not by oriental standard, it poses an unanswerable question. Although we do know a great deal about the physiology of sleep. We know so little about sleep and what happens during that state. So few words for so many thoughts.

            • Bella Shepard

              Thank you dear friend for reading and commenting. You are so right! A couple of years ago I read a wonderful book "Why We Sleep" and discovered such amazing things about what we think is the simple act of sleeping, it's anything but simple.

            • Teddy.15

              One of the best senryu I have ever read dear Bella, I suspect you went to a million beautiful places and you saw those you love. How else could you have come back whole! Stunning, I'm randomly reading your stuff and I always go to the titles and I'm never disappointed so glad I didn't miss this one of my favourite forms of poetry and this is superb. 💖

              • Bella Shepard

                Dearest Teddy, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. It was you after all, who introduced me to senryu, and encouraged me when I tried. Back then I was the newbie, and you were always so kind and welcoming. I am forever in your debt my friend, you have no idea what being here, and meeting you has meant to me. God bless!

                • Teddy.15

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