Knowingly.
Sweet with intrigue being itself,
bud-tight but becoming
unfurled one precious red rose
sent from long distance
holds telling beauty that melts
with its fragrance her
ache for his kiss so knowingly.
Impassioned, compelling, its
hopeful message unfaded
this rosy incarnadine secret
sets her desire vibrating.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: July 22nd, 2022 03:01
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Comments5
A fine write Fay.
Glad you enjoyed it dear Orchi.
I'll vote for Interflora anytime, Fay - done it for me, and my recipient.
Sweet and short, I will, with your permission, incorporate elements of your poem into my next accompanying message?
Delighted you will write inspired to a measure by my little effort Dave - cant wait to read your next offering my friend,.
so sad,
that nowadays, warped
feminist 'ideals' - means
some, individuals
see roses as a crude fallacy
and so, this vital tool
we clumsy, men
had, to showcase our feelings
has been stolen from us
and so, we're left with one less
option
to make our partner, heed
the feelings we keep within
(feeling's, that yearn
to spell
devotion, in words:
'Sweet with intrigue being itself,
bud-tight but becoming
unfurled one precious red rose
sent from long distance
holds telling beauty'
someone, is falling in love
wholeheartedly and is desperate
to let her know, immediately
like, one more breath
she takes without her knowing
equates
to one more second, devoid
of the happiness
she should be draped within
raining, petals of joy
from the sky above
clouds, spelling of adoration
and hope
and hope!)
simply Beautiful, dear Fay
so gentle and tender in tone
words caressing a lover's heart
like
fingers, carefully brush
petals
careful, to not stir
merely wanting, needing
to once more
touch, that treasured nature
of the one, our veins
welcome, with that drumming
pulsing
in ears glowing, that red rose
nervousness..
lol
(as-ever
your decadent poetry
never fails to bring out
the romantic in me)
Am most happy my take on what a rose depicts leads you to a caring comment like this L.B. --- -- despite somewhat warped outlooks I guess lots of females still dream of romance when sent a red rose . If my poetry inspires you to keep your romantic side alive my friend I am doubly pleased
I know that ache & know it well .. take this longing from my tongue, he sang .. red rose red, thy will be done ... x
Am sure I can hear that song of longing from here mon ami and I just knew romance would ooze from your words of review - - a rose can bring forth all sorts of aches in those given to affairs of the heart - including dreamers like me an' thee................x
A single rose is so meaningful in love Fay, wonderful words.
Andy
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