What happened to my heart
How can it break again?
Empty, torn apart
Raw and in pain
Excuse my tears
I cannot stop crying
Some part of me fears
That my heart is dying
Hold me tight
Ever I grieve
Loving is right
Others achieve
Victim of depression
Ever searching for this question…
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Author:
Tallisman (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: If you spot the question just put found it in the comments without telling where it is! It’s not line 2.!
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- User favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️.
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You know my friend, I could read YOUR poems all day. Great job!!
But did you read the hidden question? Aha! Look again!
Ok, I like a challenge... let me look again
Our hearts do not die emotionally i believe, but having soaked up a lot of pain, they need healing times.
In all probability, a healed heart is a wiser heart, a more caring and understanding heart.
The sun arises anew each day
Indeed it does, hearts are broken every minute but the world keeps on turning…,
OK, you ask how can your heart break again. Well how can your heart break again when it was already broken?? If am wrong, am sorry... But tell me!!
It’s an acrostic poem,. Read top down!, first letter of each line….
Oh God, Ok i will look again.
OMG!!! WHERE IS THE LOVE... That is awesome. I wonder if I could do something like that. I don't know though. Am not all there really... LOL
I’m sure you could!
I don't know, it looks kinda tricky.. I'll leave that up to you. Know am going to think there's hidden messages in all your poems. LOL
Neat poem and neat acrostic. Didn't spot it.
Glad you liked it, they are easier to spot if you don’t centre the text….so I did!
Glad you liked it, they are easier to spot if you don’t centre the text….so I did!
Where is the love! This intrigued me!
A bit of fun !
Fun it was!
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