So Much.
To pluck from a sparkling dawn brisk words of applause
when on golden mornings
I watch a sunflower slowly lifting its ruff-tight corsetted
under vest of nectared
yellow while nature pours forth droplets of insect food
on awakening blooms,
when bent rosebuds loaded in dew for bees straighten
and marigold faces
politely shake welcome to morning my hope to quill
these floral blessings with
adequate words which do credit to beauty by poetry
pales with so much to see.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: July 27th, 2022 04:24
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Yes, I'm finding out a lot. I never knew so much happened at dawn, but I know now from this fine write Fay.
Yes dawn or early morning is the finest place to be when blooms are awaking. Thanks for this lovely comment dear Orchi.
The garden before you, or the one in your mind's eye must be a sight to behold rich in the nurture and cherish you give us in your poetry such that visions unfold of these delicate natural blooms.
I've said, along with others and many times, you truly do have such a talent in this poetic craft. None here bring such a "realness" to natural beauty as do your fingers.
You are so generous with your reveiws dear Dusk - - thanking you immensely for the time taken to read and digest and then comment on this my piece called So Much.
there be not a single thing here that's not to like .. on the contrary, there is every reason to love every drop ... x
So glad you like the personification I tried with this piece Nev. - - my fanciful mind sees faces in flowers and asks should I find feelings if I look deeper. Oodles of thanks for your welcome review............. x
You have a gift of expression that paints beautiful pictures in the minds eye. Gentle words that evoke emotion, and make me smile. Thank you for the start to my day!
Tis my pleasure to please with penned tribute to nature dear Bella - - -earth-life is teaching new things every minute should we like to look, listen and learn.
Very lovely poem, it was very descriptive. as I read i could picture the sunflowers. nice job...
Ah thank you Raven - - it is delightful to read that you could picture the scene my pen tried with word-sketch to poetically describe.
Your welcome, and you did a wonderful job.
Fine imagery, Fay.
Lovers of dawn and early morning. Find a spot any spot and bide there for longer than a while.
Yes you are right on the ball Jerry - - it has to be a spot of quiet too - - well at least for me. What marvels we miss if we dont sometimes see the dawn in.
Gentle words fay .. a beautiful writing again ))
Thanking you so much dear Violet. Am delighted you liked the read.
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