Love Lost [OC]

FallingAwake2

Thoughts of dismay,

Since I want you to stay,

Bound to push you away.

These things can’t be pressed,

I’m already depressed,

Already obsessed,

And you’re-

You’re already gone.

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Raven333 July 27th, 2022 20:06
Liked your poem, even though short it conveyed a lot. loved the rhyme made it flow great.
- FallingAwake2July 27th, 2022 20:30
  thank you so very much for the read, the feedback, and taking the time/energy to comment! appreciate you! glad you enjoyed the poem and it spoke to you a bit
- Raven333July 28th, 2022 00:52
  Your very welcome, it was a great read
L. B. Mek July 28th, 2022 01:35
a succinct shorty, thanks for sharing
- FallingAwake2July 28th, 2022 06:32
  thanks for reading and commenting! I started off writing really long poems no one seemed to read. Although I still like that, I have been playing with shorter formats to convey my idea in less words. Appreciate you

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