Satisfaction

Fay Slimm.

 

Satisfaction.

 
Does satisfaction though brief

give measured relief only   

to flesh or will such  freedom 

breach mind and soul 

to bolster ambiguous belief ?

 

Or need we but know 

how best to share  feelings. ?    

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 1st, 2022 04:34
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Interesting words Fay . Nicely expressed . I like your questions in this ))

  • Doggerel Dave

    Just enjoy, Fay. - But not selfishly......

  • Neil Higgins

    Saw the image you chose,
    "And on this Sunday morning,all was good"
    Move along.Nothing to see here 😎
    Naughty.

  • Neville


    there is absolutely nothing here not to absolutely love .................................................... x

    • Fay Slimm.

      Greatto to have you close in my corner amigo...............x

    • MendedFences27

      Two great questions, Fay.
      The "satisfaction" of which you speak does "breach mind and soul," as well as "flesh."
      "How best to share feelings," is one of the great quests of humankind, many a relationship, gets spoiled due a lack of it.
      Great words, Fay. - Phil A.

      • Fay Slimm.

        How kind of you for reviewing the piece so thoughtfully Phil. - - agreed that sharing feelings is often neglected and reltionships suffer. Thanks loads for dropping by for a read.

      • Goldfinch60

        Feelings of love must be shared every moment of the day.

        Andy



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