Even lingering fragrance of
A crushed, withered flower,
Speaks with the deaf
And smiles with the blind
She leaves behind a wisp
Of her sweet fragrance,
Even for you, the culprit
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Author:
Aradhya (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Kindness is a universal language which transcends barriers and communicates with people regardless of their abilities or limitations.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou
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Comments3
An awesome poem on the scent we let off with other sensed things in our daily lives. Thanks for sharing.
thank you for your kind words crypticbard
Omg Aradhya this is glorious!!!!
It is a known fact that it is much easier to write a "long" poem than it is to write a "short" one, because you have to try to stuff so many different ideas and emotions concisely, but you've done marvelouslly.
The way you considered the way blind and deaf people perceive flowers is beautiful and the surprise ending is even better.
Bravo!
thank you so much rocky for taking a moment to read my words, so very much appreciated!
this makes perfect scents .. my eyes, heart and nose have insisted I thank you ................... N 🙂
and i too must thank your eyes, heart and nose Neville for the kind words! :))
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