Restored

Fay Slimm.

 

 

 

Restored.

 

Far away

on first-fringed beams of morning

rides Ol' Sol's wild horses,

rays' white light

moving in sequence

is saddling silence for

Venus as gifts

pour from her paramour Night.

 

Stars gathered

for dismissal again restored

to heavenly vaults

paley wait 'til sanctified

by another ascension where

again sought

they will display 

next cavalcade's candle fire.

 

Sweet passion  

for his Lady of ineffable form

sees the Knight

lay down won glory while

timed to break

now rises sensational Dawn

so with Venus 

veiled another day can smile.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 27th, 2022 04:17
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    I never knew there was so much to night and day. Well, I know now from this fine write!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Glad you found the write so informative and that you enjoyed the read dear Orchi

    • dusk arising

      Valourous Sol once again holds victory over night times dark defenders. And so it was this morning with a luscious glowing warmth to greet our wakening.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thanks for your generous thoughts after reading Restored dear Dusk =- Your wonderful metaphor is a poem in itself

      • Doggerel Dave

        I'm awake either too early or too late for all this (disturbed sleep patterns). Thanks for the gift of rich detail to aid my attempt to get this sorted, Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          The dawn of a day has always been one of my best times for writing a bit of poetic metaphor Dave - but it is not so often when summer here ends and dark winter mornings set in..... am delighted if any wording of mine aids your attempts to "rise and shine" with those first rays of light.

        • Bella Shepard

          Beautiful imagery of this wondrous scene, played out in the heavens. Loved it.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Am delighted to know you enjoyed the read of dawn breaking dear Bella - It never fails to take my breath away when the first rays of light appear.

          • LittleTalks

            eloquent and beautifully worded Thank you for this lovely image

            • Fay Slimm.

              A pleasure to know you enjoyed the read and thank you for dropping by my friend.

            • Goldfinch60

              Each new day brings a smile to me Fay as it obviously does for you as well.

              Andy

              • Fay Slimm.

                I certainly agree dear Andy - that there is nought better than a warm smile to start every day .

              • Neville


                this is indeed verily goodsome and then some my lady ... x

                • Fay Slimm.

                  A winsome review indeed for which I thank thee my leige and methinks such chivalry deserveth a favour so am waviing my kerchief at thy steed with gratefulness my dear Sir Neville.............x



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