A Few Moments After
Only a few moments
afterwards ..
When she had finally
caught up
with her breath again ..
She scratched
an upside down arch
in the sand
with her finger ..
Right next to where
only a moment
before, they had both
just been laying ..
Or maybe,
it might have been
the making
of a smile perhaps .. x
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Author:
Neville (
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Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet's view of "afterward glow" - -- you know how to leave much unsaid but always so telling mon ami ................x
thank you so very bloomin much my dear lady Fay .. I am truly honoured you should think that ........... x
Passion, so passionately scribed…..
Oh' tis so good to have you back here my friend .. thank you .. Neville
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn't the makings of a question mark unfinished, was it?
............................... well now you come to mention it .. nah, maybe not 🙂
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader's humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
In an age where transparency is said to be king .. it seems that you can see write through me Phil .. thank you very much my friend .. Neville
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
thank you so much Bella .. they do say that beauty is in the eye of the beholder, don't they .. N
Was it 🙂 or 🙁
The smile, that is!
I am reasonably sure it was a 🙂
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
... what a wonderful thought that is for shore & what a sight for shore eyes to behold .. but life can be a beach and things get in the waves ...................... Neville
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