Looking Forward to Later
Although at first we
just made out ..
And then, we maybe
might have fucked ..
Yet later still, perhaps
we can make love ..
Perhaps Let me Know Later
Although at first we
just made out ..
And then, we maybe
might have fucked ..
It’s not too late to
still make love perhaps ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: two scribbles one page .. its just how they came to me .. fuck knows why I marked em mature .. have you heard 7 - 8 year olds these days
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The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture's modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
thanks for your understanding Fay & for sticking with me regardless ... x
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
don't beat about the bush Mr' O just spit it out why don't ya 🙂
I've turned the air blue! Or green, or red, or....?! Why this tirade by me, Fido asks. lol.
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
I live just short of a mile from the nearest habitation except for my two sets of elderly neighbours .. and I'm gonna sit tight for a while yet 🙂
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you've hit the jackpot.
thank you Bella for your insight and understanding .. the points you raise are precisely those I had hoped to convey 🙂
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
you just can't beat a bit o love now can ya Andy 🙂
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
Ah' .. would you believe that feels so much better .. Thank you too Christina .. I have missed you here.. I hope you n yours are all well 🙂
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