The steel fortress
is bullet proof
Until someone inside
opens fire
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 31st, 2022 13:45
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a thought.
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The steel fortress
is bullet proof
Until someone inside
opens fire
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Comments8
Definitely, never ever think you are protected within.
Thank you my friend for reading and commenting!
Very nice, Bella, and quite true.
M.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
You pen so well the shock of bullets fired from inside a steel-built partnership - -- a potent three-liner dear Bella.
Thank you dear friend. I love your metaphor of a steel-built partnership, you captured it perfectly.
Well Bella, I'm not sure I wanted this: the relationships metaphor consensus lead to a mental rehearsal of possibilities which did not improve my day one whit.....😟
Never mind, I'm moving on... 🙂
I am so sorry if I cast a pall upon your day, but sometimes we just grin and bear it. lol
Ture words Bella and very relevant in these times.
Andy
Thank you my dear friend!
A fine write Bella.
Is this the place - steel, and sound-proof, where they hide away from me singing?! heehee.
It is, so sing away my friend!
They 'steel' themselves when I feel a song coming on! lol.
Bella this is a wise and wonderful statement.
Thank you my friend for your kind comment, so much appreciated.
such a sobering thought .. indeed I doubt I will ever forget this sombre little gem .. Neville
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