Abandon.
The glorious power of sexual acts
if allowed unlocks fastened doors,
unfolds secret flowers of affection
and pours emotion on extra bouts
of breathlessly coupled invention.
A partner's treatment of a lover's
feelings might bring to light hosts
of denial to answer fierce passion's
surrender while abandon becomes
more freely exposed to advances.
Ecstasy if undergone before may
ready itself without delay to open
more ways to desire interchange
if care guides tenderest foreplay
and warms inexperienced shyness.
Pleasure of mating if willingly felt
will be partaken without any coy
for sexual behaviour between two
lovers can taste divine time after
every delectably beautiful time.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 2nd, 2022 08:32
- Comment from author about the poem: A dash of gentle erotica to raise a few eyes, laughs or memories etc..... Hope you enjoy.
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Comments6
I got turned on by the first stanza .. and by the end of the fourth, I was overcome .. 💖 each could be a stand alone poem in its own write but I dig what you have done here and take my hat off to you mistress Fay .. actually I didn't, I'm sitting here completely naked except for my sombrero ... 🙂 x
I never get far - Fido never lets me have anything 'erotic'! heehee.
I should get my coat and get out more, as they say - but not to give Fido extra walkies!
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem, Fay. It is difficult to write erotica and not fall into the obscene. Here you skate along beautifully. Your poem becomes "delectably beautiful" as you progress. This is a poem worth reading. - Phil A.
Practice, as in your poetry, can make perfect, Fay. Not that when it comes to the subject of your piece should one believe that perfection has been achieved.... more practice, I say, more practice...
So very true Fay, even now at my age.
Andy
So very true Fay, even now at my age.
Andy
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