OVERWHELMING

Raven333

The silence is so loud

I can hear it buzzing,

In my ear.

But it's the constant

Alone time,

That I really

Do fear.

I hobble around

Try to find,

Something to do.

But all I ever

Can think of,

Is how am no longer

Me..

Why must these tears

Overwhelm me,

I no longer

Can put up a fight.

This loneliness,

Takes over

Night after night.

Don't want nobody,

To know it

Don't feel sorry,

For me!!!

I stare off

In the distance,

I no longer can see.

Am so tired,

Of this sadness

I just wish it,

All away.

It's going to drive me

Into complete madness,

One of these days.

And I feel I have been,

Lead astray.

Someone please!!

Just love me

Hold my hand..

Because this feeling,

Am getting

I can no longer stand.

Please someone!!

Sit with me

PLEASE..

Am tired of being alone.

PLEASE..

We don't even have to talk.

That's when the tears,

Start coming

And I just want,

To crawl up..

Under a rock.

  • Author: Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2022 05:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sadness and being alone to much..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • shaa

    Isn't it astonishing how loneliness can be Peaceful and yet hurt soo bad. I feel truly overwhelmed, your words just bring out all of this emotion... sadness, despair and longing. I must say you've done a lovely piece

    • Raven333

      Thank you so much shaa, your comment means alot

    • Justa_Geezer

      It's so nice to see your return here Raven, and with another great write. I think a lot of us on are either on our own, or feel lonely, probably one good reason why we resort to writing poetry, not only does it fill our time, but we can let go of our emotions in our words. I have certainly missed your presence here, as I'm sure have others. Another heartfelt outburst from you, and nicely written too, keep it up friend !

      • Raven333

        Thank you my friend for such a uplifting comment

      • orchidee

        Ohhh, invite me over. I'll break the silence. I'll sing to ya!
        Fat lot of use that will be. It will make things worse!! heehee.

        • Raven333

          LOL, know don't tempt me orchidee...

        • tallisman

          Justageezer said it all! Your work is amazing. Well done Raven for another brilliant write ! Poetry is, so I an told, all about emotion, and in this work you are overwhelmed by it. Superb! Thanks for sharing!

          • Raven333

            Thank you for taking the time, because I apologize that I haven't token the time but believe it or not am getting a little better.. just to much at the same time and my heart exploded.. I appreciate you



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