The silence is so loud
I can hear it buzzing,
In my ear.
But it's the constant
Alone time,
That I really
Do fear.
I hobble around
Try to find,
Something to do.
But all I ever
Can think of,
Is how am no longer
Me..
Why must these tears
Overwhelm me,
I no longer
Can put up a fight.
This loneliness,
Takes over
Night after night.
Don't want nobody,
To know it
Don't feel sorry,
For me!!!
I stare off
In the distance,
I no longer can see.
Am so tired,
Of this sadness
I just wish it,
All away.
It's going to drive me
Into complete madness,
One of these days.
And I feel I have been,
Lead astray.
Someone please!!
Just love me
Hold my hand..
Because this feeling,
Am getting
I can no longer stand.
Please someone!!
Sit with me
PLEASE..
Am tired of being alone.
PLEASE..
We don't even have to talk.
That's when the tears,
Start coming
And I just want,
To crawl up..
Under a rock.
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Author:
Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sadness and being alone to much..
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Comments4
Isn't it astonishing how loneliness can be Peaceful and yet hurt soo bad. I feel truly overwhelmed, your words just bring out all of this emotion... sadness, despair and longing. I must say you've done a lovely piece
Thank you so much shaa, your comment means alot
It's so nice to see your return here Raven, and with another great write. I think a lot of us on are either on our own, or feel lonely, probably one good reason why we resort to writing poetry, not only does it fill our time, but we can let go of our emotions in our words. I have certainly missed your presence here, as I'm sure have others. Another heartfelt outburst from you, and nicely written too, keep it up friend !
Thank you my friend for such a uplifting comment
Ohhh, invite me over. I'll break the silence. I'll sing to ya!
Fat lot of use that will be. It will make things worse!! heehee.
LOL, know don't tempt me orchidee...
Justageezer said it all! Your work is amazing. Well done Raven for another brilliant write ! Poetry is, so I an told, all about emotion, and in this work you are overwhelmed by it. Superb! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for taking the time, because I apologize that I haven't token the time but believe it or not am getting a little better.. just to much at the same time and my heart exploded.. I appreciate you
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