Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You

Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You


I cannot bear the thought of

night, the cold,

or dark my love, without you ..

So pray, come lay

all day, right here beside me ..

Then let us keep

each other warm, but oh’ my love

so very, very lightly ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2022 12:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Teddy.15

    I'd say you have some very heavy beauty in this what a romantic note. Kudos and so good to see yah! πŸ’–

    • Neville

      How kindly kind thou art & mostest .. You are indeed one mighty fine hostess .. πŸ’–

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ah - your fans will love this piece of fancy my friend. A tempting invite your pen makes with nightfall now autumn draws near. Warm as ever your words Nev. so shall I pack my best flannel nightie and come knocking your door........ or maybe just put this write right into my faves..............x

      • Neville

        You are indeed, as is oft the case, far too good for words Fay .. Tho' thanking you both kindly & true with nought but them, is the least I can do, this autumnal Friday ............. x

      • Bella Shepard

        The sweet romance and simplicity of just being together. No words, just closeness, oneness. You have captured this beautifully my friend!

        • Neville

          Yeah .. Now what could possibly be better than that .. Bless you dear B for you have surely blessed me πŸ™‚

        • dusk arising

          Moments from the past remain imprinted on our soul.

          • Neville

            A fundamental fact indeed, thank you kind sir .. Tis in my opinion why both poets & poetry were originally formed ........ Hope things are improving your end DA .. Neville

          • Doggerel Dave

            Thought a gem, but then a warm comforting pillow as I drift to sleep with its company - and her.....

            • Neville

              Then I do surely thank thee .. you soppy old dog you .. Ta from the both of us & then some .. Oh' n I aint referring to my several personalities πŸ™‚

              • Doggerel Dave

                Nah - you and your personalities get outa the way - she's mine now...well for a while....

              • Goldfinch60

                Wonderful loving words Neville.


                • Neville

                  Cheers my little Golden Wonder ... πŸ™‚

                • Christina8

                  Oh there's the romantic side of Neville! I love this poem. I read it so fast I thought the title was "Just a few of the things I don't like about you" Ha! I was expecting a very different poem but pleasantly surprised!

                  • Neville

                    Hey Christina, thanks for stopping by to consider my romantic side .. I kinda like the other side of me better ........................ sometimes & I so wish you well ......... πŸ™‚

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