Inside Dreams.
Truly renewing
within my core I now feel your own.
Fondly consoling
inside dreams I see your face alone.
Deftly refreshing
I bathe in the fusion my spirit adores
Boldly transforming
inside my essence I now carry yours.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Lovely Fay.So rhythmic.
If dreams are the esoteric stepping-stones that serve as a temporary bridge between the conscious here & now and the sub-conscious .. then you have just nailed them .. Indeed, Mr. Kipling would insist that this whole page is 'exceedingly good' & I would have no reservations in agreeing with him ..................... Neville x
A union that transcends typical maudlin modes of companionship. A truly inspiring poem/dream. Thanks for sharing Fay. /Rik.
Normally some dreams manage to express thoughts, emotions, intuitions incapable of expression in any other way. You have just overcome that Fay, in the way only poetry can.
Great stuff.
Beautiful words fay )) very nicely expressed . Liked the read ..
A wonderful piece Fay.
Andy
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