Be To Me.
Be to me eternity's song
and not as lust's transient notes.
Be as the forever of strong
affection and not just for moments.
Be like zest without limit
and not as cold's breakable bond.
Be to me true as infinity
for heaven applauds bold's resolve.
Be alive to ageless passion
and not just in first blush of youth.
Be to me need ever lasting
for such keeps alight desire's beauty.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 30th, 2022 10:06
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Comments8
this is quite simply outstanding poetry ..
and that, is an understatement .... x
And you are more than kind my long-time friend - - am so so pleased you enjoyed the read Nev................x
A well tended fire brings rapturous flames from a well seasoned vessel! Splendid articulation dear poet!
You are so right with the well tended fire-comparison with how rapture is ever remembered dear Rik - many thanks for your comment.
So beautiful Fay 🙂🌸 love your writing today
And your comment is so welcome dear Violet. Thanking you very much for dropping by..
Wow, Fay. That is really, really good.
Ah - so glad the write got your welcome thumbs up dear Jerry - I hoped it would come over as seen not too full of romantic cliches.
Beautiful verse, enchanting pic, timelessness resides in the soul for all ages. Your thoughts expressed so vividly, I am always in awe. Such a fav.
Always so appreciate of your thoughtful comments dear Bella and more thank yous too for listing this wtite as one of your faves.
Such a wonderful poem Fay, they will last for eternity.
Andy
Yes and eternity is just the right word for love and its wonderful feelings dear Andy. Your wise comments are always appreciated my dear poet-friend.
Being yourself, you let the words flow effortlessly, leaving the reader lusting for more.
I truly appreciate this delightful comment and thanking you sincerely for dropping by Suresh.
If she only feels like half of your words I'm doing a great job!
Thank you for sharing from your beautiful soul.
Much peace and respect
Bless you Dan - -- your heart is so warm I am sure your love will succeed with whoever you choose. thank you a load for leaving this lovely comment.
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