take two

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind


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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 4th, 2022 06:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: If only life could be the same feel as those bygone sci-fi programmes that filled our imaginations and dreams. LOL
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard
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  • sorenbarrett

    "Personification of hope" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved your second stanza. It held so many great images and metaphors.

    • arqios

      Hey Soren, yes, bouncing off known metaphors, at least in some quarters and slingshotting to new horizons. Thanks kindly.

    • orchidee

      Good write CB.

      • arqios

        Thanks orchi!

      • Bella Shepard

        We can only hope that the tomorrow which is there now, will have learned from the past which we are today. For every moment of every day we make the future. An enigmatic and thought provoking read my good poet. Definitely a fav!

        • arqios

          Thanks Bella, our thoughts and dreams seem like our bridge to the future and our first steps into tomorrow. Awesome to be continuing the conversation!

        • Doggerel Dave

          'If only' - but it ain't, Rik, is it?
          Fires floods and military spending...
          "Consumed in the fervent disappointment and disgust" is me!
          Well shouted.

          PS: 'cryptic' is right, mate - your piece is embedded here in such a way which makes a quick copy and paste impossible - how so? Commercial secret?

          • arqios

            screenshot and then posted as an image Dave.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Whose "hope" would not be uplifted again to look forward to new tomorrows after reading this masterful collection of metaphor - - Such a good read Rik.

            • arqios

              Thanks Fay. Glad that this gave an uplifting. Kind regards. Rik.

            • Goldfinch60

              Hopefully one day we will all be together in complete unity Rik. Maybe?

              Andy

              • arqios

                That's something to look forward to with great anticipation Andy!
                Rik.



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