The Teddy Challenge

tallisman

Hello all!

I wrote a poem and unintentionally upset free versers and non rhyming poets! Not intentional, I forgot to leave a comment that it was “tongue in cheek”. Apologies!

However Friend Teddy challenged me to do free verse poem about love, as a penance, here goes!

 

 

I feel your love

Warming me

Your breath

Excites me

Your skin

Touches me

And I am lost

 

dont forget to come and visit at www.tallisman.co.uk !

  • Author: Tallisman (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 6th, 2022 01:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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  • arqios

    Good stuff. Now we're all on the same page in poetic harmony!

  • Doggerel Dave

    Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all contrary views are out of place? Re-place it, otherwise I for one have no place to go...."OK - bugger off " comes from the chorus....

    Look wot you dun now, Teddy. LOL.

  • Goldfinch60

    There is no way your poem upset me Tallisman, it is a shame that you removed it, poetry has so many forms and they can all be appreciated by all.

    Andy

  • Doggerel Dave

    Not reinstated your "controversial' piece yet then? 🙂



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