Hello all!
I wrote a poem and unintentionally upset free versers and non rhyming poets! Not intentional, I forgot to leave a comment that it was “tongue in cheek”. Apologies!
However Friend Teddy challenged me to do free verse poem about love, as a penance, here goes!
I feel your love
Warming me
Your breath
Excites me
Your skin
Touches me
And I am lost
dont forget to come and visit at www.tallisman.co.uk !
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Author:
Tallisman (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 6th, 2022 01:09
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Comments4
Good stuff. Now we're all on the same page in poetic harmony!
Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all contrary views are out of place? Re-place it, otherwise I for one have no place to go...."OK - bugger off " comes from the chorus....
Look wot you dun now, Teddy. LOL.
There is no way your poem upset me Tallisman, it is a shame that you removed it, poetry has so many forms and they can all be appreciated by all.
Andy
Not reinstated your "controversial' piece yet then? 🙂
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