Brief.
The gaze
of late sun falls on unsettled
memory
and lights heartache ahead.
The past
of shared sunshine refreshes
her missing
as tears slide down in regret.
The dusk
waves goodbye to destiny's
brief moment
as future's inevitable crests.
The stars
tho', like her, will remember
love's lightning
was brilliant when at its best.
- Author: Fay Slimm. ( Offline)
- Published: October 6th, 2022 04:14
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 37
Comments4
Good write Fay.
I will have to have 'brief' swoons, or I won't have time to read the poems if I'm all in a faint! lol.
Swoon away briefly then Orchi -- - though I hope your faint melts for your to read other poems too.
I dunno what a brief faint is exactly! Do I revive after, say, 10 seconds? That will give me time to read others poems too. Fido helps me revive of course. lol.
Another great poem Fay.Apologies from me,as I will be intermittent on here,but I will be around,as often as I can 😎
Good to see you here even intermittently dear Neil - - be assured you are missed a- - meanwhile take care of dear self my friend.
Love's lightning will always be there Fay.
Andy
Yes love once alight will always stay bright through happy memories dear Andy. Thank you for your caring reminder of love's great power.
very sad but quite brilliant too ..x
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