She bought it for me!
My lover bought me a car,
The car of my dreams,
Such a wonderful surprise.
I was in tears,
My dream had come true
And it was my lover,
My lover who made it so true.
There in front of me was my car,
My Aston Martin DB11.
My life had become perfection,
I stood in front of my dream
Which had become reality.
I went up to it,
Took it out of its box,
And put it in pride of place
On my mantlepiece.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 7th, 2022 01:18
- Comment from author about the poem: When ever my children or grandchildren ask what I want for my birthday or for Christmas I always say "An Aston Martin DB11, you can get them from £147,00.00"
- Category: Humor
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Comments4
Gotta love those Matchbox miniature models Andy! I had about 600+ of them by the time I was 9! Let's go for a spin on your brand spanking new Aston Martin DB11!
Thank you Rik, I too have many models from the past.
Anytime you are round my way we can go for a spin.
Andy
Good write Gold. lol.
Thanks Orchi.
There’s always hope old lad - why not?
Your mantle piece is full of dreams;
And now there is no other spot -
Just rob a bank - go to extremes.
My full apologies, Andy. My solution is totally impractical. In this digital age, banks no longer carry large amounts of cash. I don’t want to be accused of leading you astray..
Love the surprise, the humour – great write.
I do have the cash but people just will not accept white fivers nowadays. LOL
Thank you Dave.
Andy
Been out of the Old Country too long – didn’t know what denomination the white ones were. Anyway, I never saw anything greater than a ten bob note and coin (fade in the squeaky violins). All that aside Andy, I feel you should divert your attention from a flashy chariot and consider a new mattress…..
Already bought a new mattress Dave, and very good it works too.
Andy
O I was reading it with an open mouth. I always had fascination for 1920s cars.....their beautiful models....I was thinking of them only when I happened to see it at one of the poetry contests .....That was a fun to pen it and treasure it in my life....that was not the end i was travelling in my city when i happened to see it with my own eyes.....that was really a blessing....one day i took a shot of it though little far....another time i'll go little closer to it.....Your poem refreshed all those memories and experiences of mine....thank you.
Thank you bellflower, I am so glad that I refreshed those glorious memories of yours.
Andy
Thank you Andy....it was really beautiful and refreshing...
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