That Point Where We Each Begin

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

That Point Where We Each Begin

 

Here, when we lay

like this

there is no need for

words at all

nor even mirrors ..

Somehow

we lose the want

of them ..

Here, when we lay

like this

where clarity and

clouding

do each reside and

simultaneously

play their

little tricks on us ..

That point

when it all seems

so perfect ..

Here, when we lay

like this

where we are lent

a vague but

otherwise agreeable

ambiguity ..

That precious point

when neither

you or I are sure, where

you might end

and then, the me begins

or vice versa ..

That then, must surely be

the point

we each become perfect ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 8th, 2022 04:13
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 47
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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Comments4

  • SureshG

    Superb!

    • Neville


      Hello stranger, thank you for calling on me today .. I seriously hope you are safe and well my friend 🙂

      • SureshG

        Thanks for enquiring, but all is well at my end, it’s how has your recovery been?

        A one word response, because that’s how I felt about this poem.

      • Christina8

        I love this poem! So satisfying, laying "like this', isn't it? Wonderful visual. Excellent!!

        • Neville



          it is dear C .. and thank you for sharing that and of course reminding me .................. x

        • Fay Slimm.

          Strange that time when two never know where the "me" ends and the"you" begins - -- you scribe it briliantly in this piece of perception my dear friend and tis a fave with me for sure..............x

          • Neville


            glad you feel the very same way Fay ... wink wink x

          • Goldfinch60

            True words Neville.

            Andy

            • Neville



              cheers Andy ....... 🙂 N



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