Burden Lifted?

Christina8

She is out of the house, yet still here

The burden of her still heavy,

The bills come in so fast

It's hard just to be me.

 

Antiquated as shit, this old house

has her problems as well

Giving me nightmares, the problems

overrun my mind, oh hell!

 

Yes she may be out of this big house

But now it's quite empty.

Left to rearrange and clean it

But she is no longer a burden upon me!

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 8th, 2022 09:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: When I say she is gone but still here, I mean someone who lived in my home who I've taken care of for a long time is in a rest home now.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    You pen the burden some carers carry so well here Christina - the time for a rest home is often so welcome and may you soon feel the benefit of more rest yourself after caring for someone so long.

    • Christina8

      Thank You Fay! Yes it may take me a while to rest up....

    • orchidee

      A fine write Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thank you orchidee!

      • Neville



        I get the feeling you needed a break .. this poem is so very ragged and real, I am sure that many here and elsewhere would be able to relate ........... my guess is that it will take some time to get accustomed to the new space in your house .... Neville

        • Christina8

          You are certainly right Neville! All this space is getting to me but i'll get used to it for sure. Thanks for the read!

        • Goldfinch60

          I can fully understand your meaning in these words Christine.

          Andy

          • Christina8

            Thank you Andy....appreciated!

          • SureshG

            When it becomes more than we can handle, it depletes us of our energy. Loving is to relinquish.

            • Christina8

              thank you so much sureshG! Appreciated!



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