Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Do you see what I mean ..
She asked ..
No, but I hear what you say ..
He replied ..
And then, they both laughed
as each took
a deep breath, before stepping
right into the
path of the 08.57 and oblivion ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: October 10th, 2022 03:25
- Comment from author about the poem: they say s**t happens, don't thy .. well take my word for it .. it sure does
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Comments5
Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this stark picture of very sudden and unexpected tragedy - -- a heart-wrenching read Nev. - -
thanks Fay .. it is sadly, nothing more than what it says on the label .......... x
Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the realities of people's lives, yet i find this disturbing....
Me too mate .............. Me too & no maybe's but thanks for stopping by ... Neville
Oh doubles. Sad it wasn't a tennis match or a café.
cheers
Ahh, was the train on time that day? Doh!
I'll leave that up to you to decide, I don't often feel compelled to write about the punctuality of trains .. and anyway, we both know they are never on time in the UK Mr. O
Amazing words Neville, in this day and age it is happening more and more.
I have experienced close people trying to commit suicide but they spoke to me and all became better.
Andy
Yes, still on the increase .. However, it would seem you have a golden touch .. I may start calling you Midas Andy 🙂
No Midas Neville, I just listen.
Andy
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