A Few More Things Remembered

Neville

A Few More Things Remembered

 

I doubt I shall ever forget how

she always

closed her eyes in the shower

Yet kept them

Both wide open in the rain ..

But am sure

I will always remember and

treasure

each one of those flowers she

embroidered

and sewed onto the patches

she pinned

to the knees of my torn 501’s

Which by the way

were even more faded than

the lilac and the

cream one’s on my mothers

old pinafore ..

I also remember how funny

it seemed,

 they both smelled so similar

and how I then

thought, if love had a smell,

it would smell of

my lady, fresh from her shower

and small cotton flowers

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 11th, 2022 01:24
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Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful loving words Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville


      Thank you & kindly Andy.

      Neville

    • orchidee

      Good write N.

      • Neville



        Write good then Mr. O

        • orchidee

          Should I meet her? Can only I answer that?! lol.

        • Doggerel Dave

          50i's did it for me, Nev - although never found any lady to attach embroidered flower patches to 'em... quite conceivably this could be seen in my circumstances as a positive.... where I worked...

          • Neville



            Ah' but twas a long time ago you old dog you .......... quite possibly before patches became the in thing even ...................................................... cheers mate 🙂

          • Fay Slimm.

            Your usage of word is simply stunning in this romantic memory of the way things were. - -- I love the final thought - that "if love had a smell,
            it would smell of my lady" - -- -- such an appealing read Nev........................

            • Neville



              How extraordinarily kind our Fay ............ thank you for the thumbs up my friend ... x

            • Garth Rakumakoe

              Your words have always had a life of their own, and their own personality, Neville. You speak not just through, but with your pieces as well. A beautiful work of art this is, like those rare flowers that just never lose their charm, sir. A definite favorite of mine.

              • Neville



                Thank you so very much for that hear-warming message Garth .. Neville

              • Christina8

                A wonderful poem....so full of sensory images and smells. Spectacular!

                • Neville



                  Under such circumstances, then I thank you both kindly and true Christina8 🙂

                • SureshG

                  ahhhh!!!!, that never fades from the memory glands with the passage of time.

                  • Neville



                    I am so glad you caught a whiff in passing my friend ... Neville



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