Voiceless

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Voiceless.

 

There exists silence not found by sound,

like the heart of a desert or deep

 below ground

where, mutely profound

voiceless vibrations share feelings 

without need for words

is true of human souls too when

     facing strange feelings

know an exchanged deja vu then

transfers, tho' not aloud,

fate's silent speech that, if doubly felt,

love never needs sound.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2022 03:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • arqios

    A muted world should reveal un-muted feelings and vibes. It would feel different but they exist nonetheless. Profound thoughts in verse. Thanks Fay!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Just wandering among the likelihoods of what soundless must feel like but thanks Rik for your thoughtful comment on my take on Voiceless and for all your encouragement.

    • orchidee

      A good....{........................}.
      I started to comment, but me comment shall be voiceless! Notice the silence there in brackets. I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
      True though. Sometimes we feel we HAVE TO or MUST say something. It can sort of interfere with, or disrupt the silence at times.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thanking you for your voiceless comment on Voiceless dear Orchi - - glad you dropped by for a read.

      • Paul Bell

        Yes, love can be silent, and most of the time probably is. Sometimes words just get in the way of a cheery wave.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Too true Paul - -- words can be felt when love's in the air - - great to have your visit and comment.

        • Goldfinch60

          That last line is so true in your wonderful words Fay.

          Andy

          • Fay Slimm.

            I guess you would be attracted to the thoughts in the last line dear Andy - - words are not needed when two hearts feel love.

          • SureshG

            I feel the silence in your words

            • Fay Slimm.

              I am well blessed when a reader can feel the depth of a message - thanking you dear friend for your visit and comment on my few lines on silence.

            • Neville



              sometimes your insight & words leave me speechless x

              • Fay Slimm.

                And reading your comment has me all choked up - - - yup - words between linked minds are no more needed than sweeteners in honey. ---- - -- wink wink...................x

              • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                Beautiful poem Fay 🙂

                • Fay Slimm.

                  I am delighted you feel that way about Voiceless dearViolet. - - thanking you loads for your comment.



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