Voiceless.
There exists silence not found by sound,
like the heart of a desert or deep
below ground
where, mutely profound
voiceless vibrations share feelings
without need for words
is true of human souls too when
facing strange feelings
know an exchanged deja vu then
transfers, tho' not aloud,
fate's silent speech that, if doubly felt,
love never needs sound.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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A muted world should reveal un-muted feelings and vibes. It would feel different but they exist nonetheless. Profound thoughts in verse. Thanks Fay!
Just wandering among the likelihoods of what soundless must feel like but thanks Rik for your thoughtful comment on my take on Voiceless and for all your encouragement.
A good....{........................}.
I started to comment, but me comment shall be voiceless! Notice the silence there in brackets. I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
True though. Sometimes we feel we HAVE TO or MUST say something. It can sort of interfere with, or disrupt the silence at times.
Thanking you for your voiceless comment on Voiceless dear Orchi - - glad you dropped by for a read.
Yes, love can be silent, and most of the time probably is. Sometimes words just get in the way of a cheery wave.
Too true Paul - -- words can be felt when love's in the air - - great to have your visit and comment.
That last line is so true in your wonderful words Fay.
Andy
I guess you would be attracted to the thoughts in the last line dear Andy - - words are not needed when two hearts feel love.
I feel the silence in your words
I am well blessed when a reader can feel the depth of a message - thanking you dear friend for your visit and comment on my few lines on silence.
sometimes your insight & words leave me speechless x
And reading your comment has me all choked up - - - yup - words between linked minds are no more needed than sweeteners in honey. ---- - -- wink wink...................x
Beautiful poem Fay 🙂
I am delighted you feel that way about Voiceless dearViolet. - - thanking you loads for your comment.
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