Why Not Just Call It a Day

Neville

Why Not Just Call It a Day

 

I don’t want to push my luck and

break this fragile

run of rare good fortune we have

so very much

enjoyed, in recent times, my friend

But I seem to

recall you have betrayed me before

and since I don’t like

ultimations, I won’t let you do it again

so let’s just call it a day, okay

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 13th, 2022 04:43
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Paul Bell

    Yes, three good days is a honeymoon, after that it's all downhill.

    • Neville



      Cheers Paul ......................... 🙂

    • Doggerel Dave

      Now there's plain speaki'n for yer.
      Like this one a lot, Nev.
      Wouldn't care to share the content of that ultimatum, would you.....?
      ....Nah - a gentleman never tells, right?

      • Neville



        Quite right, cheers though Dave ..

        Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        The she in this double would know where she stood right enough by these straightforward lines Nev. - -one betrayal can be coped with but twice - - well it needs the chop given - - -- honestly written and with such gentle reminders..........x

        • Neville



          Having just tested positive for covid (note the small c) I'm not entirely sure whether it was my imagination or the delirium that may have got the better of me & my pen ...... thanks tho' regardless x

        • orchidee

          I never knew I betrayed ya! Or did I betray a certain gal?
          OK, we'll call it a day - Goodnight! lol.

          • Neville



            I suspect you may well be in denial Mr. O 🙂

          • Goldfinch60

            I agree with what Fay has said.

            Andy

            • Neville



              Cheers GF60 🙂



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