Finding Paradise.

Goldfinch60



In life we sometimes find ourselves in a dark place

And wonder if we can find the light once more.

There are three steps that we can take to reach that good life,

That good life which we all deserve.

The first step is to have a good thought to think about,

The second is to say a good word to others to help them,

And the third is to carry out a good deed to show others the way.

With these steps in our lives we will always be there,

Always be in Paradise.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 20th, 2022 01:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life is good.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
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Comments5

  • arqios

    The goodness of thought, word, and deed appear to be a foreshadowing of Paradise and perhaps by this our appetites are whetted!

    • Goldfinch60

      They surely are whetted and may they become reality.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.
      I was in a dark place. I forgot to switch the light on and fell down the stairs (did I?)! lol.
      Argghhh! ya hear me tumbling. Good acting by me, yes?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Act away Orchi.

        Andy

      • Fay Slimm.

        Those three steps are vital to stay on that good road of Paradise. A fine reminder and thank you dear Andy,.

        • Goldfinch60

          So true Fay, thank you.

          Andy

        • Doggerel Dave

          Please now hope it works for more than just you;
          Otherwise you are chirping in a storm.
          While the personal is political,
          Paradise cannot ever be the norm.

          Keep it up, Andy - you never know...mine is just one opinion....

          • Goldfinch60

            I will always keep it up, positive is my middle name!

            Andy

          • dusk arising

            Taint what ya get makes ya feel good, it's what ya give.



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