Together In Jazz.

Goldfinch60



I sit here in the hotel room 

Writing these words, 

My lover fast asleep in the bed. 

Together on holiday 

In the place that we call ‘Our Place’, 

The place we first came to together, 

Together on holiday. 

A hotel full of things to do, 

And things to enjoy. 

The entertainment is superb 

And last night was no exception, 

A jazz band taking us back, 

Back to the early jazz sounds 

With tunes that we know so well 

And have been with me all my life. 

A wonderful evening, 

But even more wonderful 

As my lover and I were together, 

As we will be forever more. 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 25th, 2022 00:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: The band in the video was the one we saw last night,
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 23
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  • Neville



    Even more charming than a flock of goldfinches .. What more could a fella wish for ..................... Neville 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      So true Neville, a great evening.

      Andy

    • bellflower

      there is no more blessing than live this moment which you have put on the pages with your most memorable ink.....your poem reminds me my good days. thank you.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you bell flower, much appreciated. So glad I reminded you of your good days.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Wonderful write on the evening's entertainment at your memorable hotel stay - thank you for sharing it Andy - - loved the video too.

        • Goldfinch60

          It certainly was a good evenings entertainment, thank you Fay.

          Andy

        • Doggerel Dave


          Please tell the name of that hotel -
          I’ve stayed in some duds in my time.
          Fawlty Towers had nothing on them:
          Short-sheeted bed was one such crime.

          • Goldfinch60

            The Bembridge Coastal Hotel on the Isle of Wight, Mary and I are here for a few days, it is a great place.

            Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              So not so far from Sandown, where my childhood holidays were spent. Thanks Andy.

            • Bella Shepard

              Dear Andy, I have to say that you had my toes tapping, head swaying and a great big smile on my face as I listened the the musical accompaniment, and read this delightful poem. So much joy that it is infectious, and a fav!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Bella, much appreciated.

                Andy



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