Internally Yours
There was something just
a little bit
ever so special about
all of that
simultaneous flexing
the pulsing,
the squeezing and those
delicious
after shock spasms they
once shared
on several, let’s just say
exquisite occasions
Not to mention
the salt they each shed ..
Although to be fair
that was an
understatement, if ever
there was, to
describe the joint climaxes
they then
divided between them
Okay, so I
was never that good at
rhyming but
hope you can feel where
I’m coming from ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Oohh err Matron ...... Not gonna be around for the next couple of days so thought I would leave you with a bang .. I'm off to see Bob Dylan :)
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Comments6
Will Bob (Dylan) cause you to write less swoony poems?! I won't recover from my latest swoon until you return. lol.
the concert was excellent & you now have permission to squeak or swoon whatever you prefer 🙂
Sounds like some sort of pickling or stuffing a chicken - but whatever or which it reads tastily hot - - enjoy Bob Dylon mon fortunate ami - - he- has always been one of my faves so see if you can get him to sing "If Not For You" - -- for me..........x
He was very good but as always, no requests or encore .. but the best I've heard him for a long while x
Was only joking cus of course he does no requests - -- -but great that you felt he is singing as well as ever - -- but meant to say also that I loved your hot pennings of Internally Yours ...............x
Wow Nev - that was a sweaty ride. Enjoy your trip - who knows, they might still be shagging when you get back.....🤣
One neva knows one's luck mate .......... 🙂
Hot, sensual, evocative, whew! I especially love the witty, double entendre at the end, so I think I know where you're coming from. Don't forget to tell Bob hi from me.
thank you for spotting that Bella .. I did make quite a bit of noise when he first came on I can tell ya 🙂
You certainly left us with a BANG Neville, enjoy your time away.
Andy
Cheers Andy ......... 🙂
'simultaneous flexing
the pulsing,
the squeezing and those
delicious
after shock spasms'
you missed your calling, dear Poet
I'm sure there's a few 'Fifty Shades of Lava heat on a page'
waiting to entice the world, if ever you feel liking putting it down in risqué ink..
lol
(Dylan must have been fun)
bless ya brother .. and just between you n me, no other 81 year old has ever before given me so much pleasure 🙂
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