A relationship like a poem
Is something you must select alone
Some you have to get to know
Some on you, over time, do grow
Some are love at first sight
Some are a stand of one night
Some driven by passion
Others by love of a fashion
Some you remember all your life
Some calm, others full of strife
Carefully nurtured, groomed and planned
Errors corrected, or they're built on sand
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sorenbarrett (
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Very apt analogy dear poet! I love how you humanize poetry to such a revealing degree. This is wonderful!
Thank you so much Rocky I appreciate your review and value your comments.
In others poetry we can communicate with the inner feelings, the heart of someone, so often hidden on the outside.
Thank you so much dusk, good to hear from you, I always look forward to your reviews and valued comments.
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time it became more endearing, and so very true. The symbolism is outstanding and it's a definite fav!
Thank you so much Bella your kind words mean a lot.
An either way image and metaphor. Each also a reflection of the other for the players in both are in possession of hearts and minds that interlock and grow and transform. TFS!
Thank you crypticbard for your review and most kind words. You are absolutely right.
indeed, i can so relate
there's a hint of the poetic, in most relationships
even those disasters we try to forget..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
Thank you L.B. it is true it seems that all relationships have their ups and downs some more than others. I deeply appreciate your review and welcome comments
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