Starry dreams

thinkerbell

Lord in my dream i was lifted out of earth

Out of the qualms of human longing 

I tumbled into the land of the stars

  • Author: Poetic persona (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2022 04:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: I read the first line of this poem in an article about a German poet and decided to complete the poem in my own unique way
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
  • User favorite of this poem: The Evil Twin.
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Comments7

  • Rocky Lagou

    "Out of the qualms of human longing." - this is revolutionary.

  • thinkerbell

    Thank you dear poet😍

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

    Yeah i think thats where we are headed. A fine dreamy starry poem. Kudos!

    Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

  • thinkerbell

    Thank you dear poet🥰

  • PoeticKwill

    Absolutely brilliant and gorgeous. Wonderful ink!

  • thinkerbell

    Thank you for the kind words , dear poet🥰🥰

  • The Evil Twin

    Very intuitive and innovative. Love it. Looking forward to more of your work.

    • thinkerbell

      Thank you dear poet🥰



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