The Future

Bella Shepard

 

Our future is there

Waiting for us to catch up

Hope we did it right….

  • Author: Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 7th, 2022 14:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: There is a theory that past, present and future exist simultaneously. We create our future each moment by what we do. Therefore it would behoove us to think before we act. Fingers crossed!
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  • Caring dove

    Makes me think of the law of attraction although I’m not sure I always like the ideas around that ..

    Yes think before we act although nobody is perfect .

    Nice writing ..



  • sorenbarrett

    Another great haiku yes we are all trying to catch up with our future.

    • Bella Shepard

      Thank you for for reading, your comments always appreciated!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thinking ahead before action is the wisest move Bella - a haiku with much food for thought.

      • Bella Shepard

        Thank you my dear Fay, your comments are greatly appreciated.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Not sure it is waiting, but it will certainly pop up at just the appropriate moment, and yes, be a judgement on what I am doing now...
        However, I have not the slightest intention of attempting a haiku here, Bella....Yours is a good 'un.

        • Bella Shepard

          Thank you dear Dave, The strangest things pop into my head at 3:00 in the morning. We've also just switched back to standard time from daylight savings, and I think the brain cells are having to adjust.

          • Doggerel Dave

            I know, that daylight saving thingy is a shocker, Bella. One can only hope that the future doesn't get too discombobulated as a result..

          • Goldfinch60

            "Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday"

            Andy

            • Bella Shepard

              I just love your comment! That must be why I seem to meet myself coming and going.

            • orchidee

              Now I'm a confused laddie lol. With past, present, and future - I met myself coming back from the shops, while on my way there. Eh?
              I talk some rot. lol.
              But I did see a guy walking backwards with shopping. Maybe practising for the Annual Backward Walking Shopping Competition, which I oversee. (do I?).

              • Bella Shepard

                I love your comment, but when I got to the last two lines I practically did a spit take all over my keyboard. I'll be chuckling all day over that one.

                • orchidee

                  Hmm - it's true. Well, not the Competition bit. That what makes it nutty!

                • SureshG

                  A few words, with deep meaning.

                  “All is predestined, yet we alone are creator’s of our destiny”

                  • Bella Shepard

                    You have phrased your comment so thoughtfully, I just love it. Thank you!

                  • Neville



                    I'm guessing that no one is going to argue with the sentiment so firmly planted in such an exceptionally well crafted 575 little poetic gem ........... Neville

                    • Bella Shepard

                      My dearest friend, you have been sorely missed. It is so good to have you back in the fold. Your comments always encourage me, and for that I am truly grateful.



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