Fear hangs like a drop
Not knowing where it might stop
Hanging, growing, clinging
Increased anxiety bringing
It stretches and threatens to fall
Muscles tighten skin starts to crawl
I hide my eyes not wanting to know
The reality I dread, but don't want to be so
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
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Such is fear! Awesome poetic description.
Thank you so much crypticbard for the review and comment.
Fear is just as your words describe soren.
Andy
Soren, your poem revolves around the overwhelming sensation of fear and anxiety. It depicts the paralyzing effect of fear that looms over time, creating a sense of impending doom and dread. Your poem focuses on the internal struggle with fear, how it manifests physically and emotionally, and the desire to avoid confronting the reality that fuels this fear, which I know so well. Yet there's nobody there to help or understand you. you're alone with all these fears in a dark box Feeling so hopeless alone and most of all Broken!
Thanks for the read and understanding. Fear is a common emotion that when we have it we feel no one else can understand and leaves us isolated. Yet it in different ways has been felt by all to a greater or lessor degree and in different ways.
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