A human explosion

evenwheniLie

 

 

 

…..A human explosion and implosion is one of the same, and everyone’s the blame, even if you didn’t take aim; man, woman and child, that’s how we’re compiled, it’s how nature has us filed, social structures attempt to mirror its callings, and properly position people in peoples, we are nature’s cathedral.  The structure is delicate like a  rose I suppose, even though we have strong bones and today we wear clothes, corruption no matter how small, can cause a fall, malfunction in necessary conjunctions; where one held their place with grace, egos and internal struggles cause disgrace in its place, individual selves plague social orders, they are the first to be slaughtered, where there was once a collective now stands a people made feeble, others stand ready to bleed you, not feed you, they stay close in an attempt to read you, so they can figure out how to hang you upside down, gut you and bleed you; they might need you. Other people that look like we do, took our land and our last lamb, they lie and say they took it from another man, cause all men are the same man, it’s only one clan that can all be traced back to one land.

  • Author: EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2022 15:27
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  • L. B. Mek

    'where there was once a collective now stands a people made feeble, others stand ready to bleed you, not feed you, they stay close in an attempt to read you,'
    astute commentary, dear Poet
    a great read!
    (but more like 'implosion'
    since all we do is hurt ourselves
    by taking down those in reach;
    see,
    it would make sense of all we did
    was retaliate, 'an eye for an eye'
    if you like
    but often, all we're doing
    is exporting our suffering
    and poisoning others to suffer
    in place of those that hurt us
    then, feel sorry for ourselves
    and claim that's it's not our fault
    we're so volatile, choosing
    to only see
    all that's done to us and ignoring
    all we do to those by our side
    but we're just fallible humans, right
    slaves to a callous fate
    originating from those inherited circumstances
    right?
    best not mention, all those other's
    that got out, evolved
    done it right and chose the very same path
    we refused to even entertain, once...)



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