Here.
Here I am
inside your rousing and as morning breaks
I shall enter your drousing.
Yes here I draw nearer as you awake.
Here I wait
felt but unheard and as your heart falters
I will feed your mind pleasure.
Yes here my care I can infiltrate more.
Here I stand
my hand holding yours and if surrendered
I'll be a whisper away.
Yes here I reveal that love is forever.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: November 30th, 2022 05:10
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Comments8
making 'here' a special place when each and every 'here' is a place of loves reveal
Yes dear Dusk here can be anywhere as long as love is there with it....... a thoughtful comment and thank you for your visit my friend.
this is one o them real love poems innit x tis indeed lovely Fay x
You got the jist Nev and so pleased you did - - I had hoped to produce a real love poem and you nailed it in one............... thanking you muchly............x
I love how it is simple yet very deep!
Thank you for your perceptive comment and so pleased you enjoyed the read of Here.
Lovely words fay 🙂
Thank you Violet.
'Here, here', or is it 'Hear, hear'? - good write Fay.
Glad you thought the write good my friend.
I love the beautiful, ethereal graphic that you have chosen. This puts me in mind of those early morning dreams just before waking, so pleasurable and lingering that you carry it throughout the day. Love is forever! Enchanting dear friend.
Ah - I am delighted you noticed the graphic as I thought it well showed what the poem was trying to capture too - thanking you Bella for your in-put after the read of Here.
great job!!! loved the way you used self expression in this one keep writing!!!
Thanking you for your visit and comment on my posting of Here. Gratitude too for the encouragement to keep the ink flowing.
So very true Fay, love is forever.
Andy
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