Ten Years After

Neville

Ten Years After

 

Ten years from now,

I am reasonably sure

I may not remember

your name, or your

number, should you

ever dare give them

to me .. But have no

doubt at all, I am sure

to recall, that fire in

those eyes of yours,

the like of which,

I had not seen before

and may never again,

until the day that I die

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2022 04:33
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    Same could be said about these exchanges of poetry. But perhaps they would have to be read aloud as the eyesight is gradually but surely fading as well.

    • Neville



      what an interesting view you propose.

    • dusk arising

      like tail lights in the snow... with no indication of where or how far they will go

      • Neville



        Precisely ................................ thank you 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        Love 's memory is timeless and its fire never alters. A comforting read dear friend.

        • Neville



          I am delighted you should see it my way, thanks Fay x

        • JoyJoy

          Beautifully relatable...

          • Neville



            you just made each corner of my mouth involuntarily reach for the ceiling .. thank you and kindly 🙂

          • Doggerel Dave

            The residue, since the data so obviously redundant....but such residue........

            • Neville



              indubitably sir 🙂

            • orchidee

              Did I meet such a lass?! lol.

              • Neville



                if you can't remember her, then I very much doubt it

              • Dr. Soma

                Beautiful, Poet.

                • Neville



                  How very kind, thank you Soma .. Much appreciated .. Neville

                • Bella Shepard

                  An encounter, seared upon the mind, not easily forgotten. Though time may dim the details, the impact remains and serves to comfort. So well versed dear friend.

                  • Neville



                    Thank you Bella ....... another very much appreciated visit from a very dear literary friend .. Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    That love will never be forgotten.

                    Andy

                    • Neville


                      thank you GF60 🙂

                    • Kinsey Peterson

                      We may not remember numbers, but we remember words. Yours are particularly touching and help to embed the muse in time for the rest of eternity. Thank you.

                      • Neville



                        and you ma'am are far too generous .. thank you & truly .. Neville

                      • Aradhya

                        A moment together is far more valuable than an eternity apart and such a memory accompanies one for life and perhaps beyond. Because it's a connection between souls and forever embedded in the heart. Time passes yet it's a moment frozen in time. A beautiful sentiment told in lovely verse Neville. Loved this!❤

                        • Neville



                          You clearly have a keen eye and have a wise head on those young shoulders my friend .. thank you so very much Neville 🙂

                        • L. B. Mek

                          Brilliant!
                          (nothing, is scorched into memory like the wrath
                          of the one, you once trusted with all your heart...)

                          • Neville



                            I am quite partial to the term brilliant .. even if I do say so my self ..... bless you brother Mek 🙂



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