Covert.
Such an ebony hour as this
readies dun moments for stolen bliss.
Dusk's satin sheet rises
to cloak secret places with hunger
yet sunsetting over
finds darkness hides bundles of risk.
Fugitive love plays
alluring games when two crave fire.
Such covert conscripts
night to form shadows for hiding.
Re-created are thrills
for covered in twilight's illegal kisses
double coupled desire
keeps need alive to seek clandestine.
Yet pleasuring ends
if ardour wants more than caresses.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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A good read fay 🙂 interesting words
Thank you Violet
sizzling sensuality, and yet
I sense the brevity waters you ink upon
I may have to come back to read again on Monday, dear Fay
dive a little deeper
oh and just gorgeously worded
what a reading treat
And humble thanks for this lovely review dear L,B.
Good write Fay.
Fido won't let me have any 'ardour'. lol
What a shame Orchi - - but glad you thought the write good.
Kind of like role playing but with a more romantic bent. Reminds me of an Audrey Hepburn movie "Paris When It Sizzles."
Wow - - I remember that film and beautiful Audrey - -- never gave thought to those gone bits of sizzle though Rik when I conjoured Covert.
wanting more when even the kisses are illegal is treading on dangerous ground
And I agree wholehearted dear Dusky - - but who among lovers today I wonder minds the danger when arranging for Covert . - -- so glad to have your welcome perception on my take on gentle erotica.
Such a twist, Fay. But both must know...otherwise....
Reminds me of something I wish........
Too true that arrangement must have duo approval Dave -- and you ended this comment very beguilingly - could it be Covert brought you back special mem'ries. ??? Oh dear - I forget - - -- "a gentleman never tells."
Not sure I'm a gentleman, Fay - but it would be all too complicated and biased on my part...and too revealing...
Another Masterpiece Fay!
Oooh grateful and blushing but liking your comment - -thanking you muchly too.
You are wonderful and very welcome 🙂
The dark of night adds an alluring dimension to passions that daylight never seems to hold. Such an appropriate title and so beautifully phrased. A real gem dear friend.
Your review reads like a poem itself dear Bella and thank you - - am delighted you enjoyed my take on Covert.
Me again.
"Night's satin sheet rises"
Not going to "expand" on that Fay,but what a wonderful love poem.Oozing with well,love 🌹
I thought you might pick out that phrase dear Neil - -- and truly appreciate that you choose no expansion but let the mind cogitate on the ooze of love.
Beautiful words once more Fay.
Andy
Yes love has many faces and Covert maybe one to those seeking romance. Thanking you Andy.
this is write up my street Fay .. just my poetic cuppa tea my friend .. x
Whew - could welcome a cuppa after this answering session and as I see your take on my view of Covert mon ami 'tis no surprise to find it right up your street !!. --- - -- am thankful as always for your thoughtful support............... . x
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