Floating on a poetic life

Poetic Dan



She ran as my eyes flowed with tears of glitter and soul, my words soon failed me with only enough energy to squeeze out a hello.

 

I've always played moments back through my head, wishing I'd showed more love or better at letting go of what I thought should be said

 

Now days I can record it in hopes to put my mind at rest, then rap it up with bow into the memory chest.

 

Knowing it's the only thing I'll be floating on when I take that last breath, sailing on from the poetic life I lead

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 6th, 2022 06:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying to keep up the flow to better connect with my soul! Appreciate your time and may we all continue to shine, with a little rhyme! Much peace and respect
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Comments4

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Lovely words in this poem …

    my eyes flowed with tears of glitter and soul,

    Good writing ))

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend it was the first words that came to mind and so hard not to change them lol
      Have a fantastic day
      Always appreciated

    • Crowns4Christ

      Very beautiful and descriptive , Dan, I can feel your love pouring forth from your words,hang in there my friend,you are doing GREAT

      • Poetic Dan

        Bless you for your kind words my friend and may you have wonderful day!
        I'll be swinging and hanging with a spirit that can't be broken!
        Always appreciate your time
        Much peace and respect

        • Crowns4Christ

          Aww, you're sweet,keep writing Dan,you are an inspiration to many

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful loving words Dan.

          Andy

          • Poetic Dan

            Really appreciated my friend and hope you're well and warm!
            Much peace and respect

          • L. B. Mek

            Beautiful! dear Poet
            these snippets you share
            of love's, depthless mementos
            nourish my will for humanity's goodwill
            to prevail, against all the odds
            if for nothing else
            to give that next generation, a shot
            at undoing all our failings
            one bright smile, at a time...

            • Poetic Dan

              Amen brother and you won't catch me saying that much lol



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