Once upon another time that never was
Drifting through another clime that ever does
Live a life that could not be and is a lie
Taking a break from eternity where no laws apply
I floated in dreams sublime which became
A place with no crime and no shame
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: December 8th, 2022 08:04
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Comments4
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.
Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
A wonderful place to be soren.
Andy
Thank you Andy for your review and comment.
this series of poetic witticisms imbued with acute commentary
are so much fun to read
I just hope you had a great time writing them
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
Thank you L.B. for taking your time to read this. I was just a bit wistful at the time and the mind just flows at times.
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