When Size is Not Everything

Neville

When Size is Not Everything

 

She said size is not

everything

I like small things

as well and

very often, instead ..

Like honey bees

bonsai trees,

seed pearls

and humming birds ..

Not to mention

those groovy

mind blowing

mindgasms that you

so kindly give

back to back when

you fuck with my head ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 9th, 2022 05:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 58
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments9

  • orchidee

    I thought I might swoon at the title. lol.

    • Neville



      You obviously managed to remain erect ...................... 🙂

    • L. B. Mek

      (yeah...
      like when a misplaced, well positioned
      word
      is enough to wreck a honeymoon's fairy-tale
      and curate a lifetime of nightmares...!)
      I fear nothing
      like the mind of a human..
      not for its insidious potency
      but for its capacity of haphazard ignorance
      detonating, emotional weapons of mass
      depression
      indifferently, clumsily
      then hands on lips, shrieking:
      ''an oopsy daisy i never meant to, really...''
      (Brilliant!
      dear Poet supreme
      Brilliant!)

      • Neville



        each corner of my mouth just did a little involuntary leap upwards in the direction of our ceiling .. cheers brother Mek 🙂

      • arqios

        ...messing with the mind, now that's no small feat!

        • Neville



          its what I do best .......... 🙂

        • Fay Slimm.

          Tiny is often likeable and gigantic can be mind-blowing but climaxing with your inventive "mindgasms" made me smile. - -- Such an orgasmic ending methinks to that beguiling title mon ami................x

          • Neville



            Thank you dear Fay ............................. x

          • Doggerel Dave

            Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow something or go into meltdown if i presented 'mindgasm' for clarification..... but I ain't no psychiatrist...🙂

            • Neville



              thisgasm, or thatgasm or indeed mindgasms n orgasms are all fine by me ....... just you be careful when you go using Google Dave too much of a good thing will either make hairs grow on the palms of your hand, or make you go blind .......................... maybe 🙂

              • Doggerel Dave

                No worries Nev, I've a very sophisticated trimmer with grades to zero - better than a shave....Both eyes have fixed lenses installed years ago (cataract surgery - lovely!).

              • Kinsey Peterson

                I cannot distinguish if this is an angry or lighthearted poem and I honestly prefer it that way. Good work Neville.

                • Neville


                  Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by and consider my little scribble Joan .. very much appreciated my friend ......... I am glad you prefer it that way because, a gentleman neva tells 🙂

                • Goldfinch60

                  Well that's one way I suppose.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    thanks for taking a crafty peek GF60 🙂

                  • sorenbarrett

                    The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words and a great message.

                    • Neville



                      How very kind of you my friend, thank you so much sorenbarrett 🙂

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Size here is definitely proportional to content, and content here is quite explosive. Ooooh!

                      • Neville



                        Ahh' feels good to me .. that'll do nicely my friend ............ Neville 🙂



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