When Size is Not Everything
She said size is not
everything
I like small things
as well and
very often, instead ..
Like honey bees
bonsai trees,
seed pearls
and humming birds ..
Not to mention
those groovy
mind blowing
mindgasms that you
so kindly give
back to back when
you fuck with my head ..
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I thought I might swoon at the title. lol.
You obviously managed to remain erect ...................... 🙂
(yeah...
like when a misplaced, well positioned
word
is enough to wreck a honeymoon's fairy-tale
and curate a lifetime of nightmares...!)
I fear nothing
like the mind of a human..
not for its insidious potency
but for its capacity of haphazard ignorance
detonating, emotional weapons of mass
depression
indifferently, clumsily
then hands on lips, shrieking:
''an oopsy daisy i never meant to, really...''
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
Brilliant!)
each corner of my mouth just did a little involuntary leap upwards in the direction of our ceiling .. cheers brother Mek 🙂
...messing with the mind, now that's no small feat!
its what I do best .......... 🙂
Tiny is often likeable and gigantic can be mind-blowing but climaxing with your inventive "mindgasms" made me smile. - -- Such an orgasmic ending methinks to that beguiling title mon ami................x
Thank you dear Fay ............................. x
Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow something or go into meltdown if i presented 'mindgasm' for clarification..... but I ain't no psychiatrist...🙂
thisgasm, or thatgasm or indeed mindgasms n orgasms are all fine by me ....... just you be careful when you go using Google Dave too much of a good thing will either make hairs grow on the palms of your hand, or make you go blind .......................... maybe 🙂
No worries Nev, I've a very sophisticated trimmer with grades to zero - better than a shave....Both eyes have fixed lenses installed years ago (cataract surgery - lovely!).
I cannot distinguish if this is an angry or lighthearted poem and I honestly prefer it that way. Good work Neville.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by and consider my little scribble Joan .. very much appreciated my friend ......... I am glad you prefer it that way because, a gentleman neva tells 🙂
Well that's one way I suppose.
Andy
thanks for taking a crafty peek GF60 🙂
The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words and a great message.
How very kind of you my friend, thank you so much sorenbarrett 🙂
Size here is definitely proportional to content, and content here is quite explosive. Ooooh!
Ahh' feels good to me .. that'll do nicely my friend ............ Neville 🙂
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