Another Fine DAy.

Goldfinch60



The day is over,

Another fine day in my life.

Meeting with friends,

Walking in the soft snow,

Seeing Natures artwork

In all its white wonder.

And all the time

She is with me,

The love of my life

Is by my side.

And as we climb the stairs

At the end of this fine day

We are still side by side

As we sleep in each others arms,

Our love shining like a star

As our life together

Goes on forever.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2022 02:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: Yet another fine day with the love in my life.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 30
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Comments8

  • Neville


    on those rare occasions when I may be feeling just a bit down .. maybe ..
    I know that not far away if I turn to your latest page, it won't be long before I'm back on form again ..

    Neville 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Neville, I will always help people.

      And

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold. Am I in that choir? Are you in it?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi. No you are not in the choir but you are welcome to join.

        Andy

      • Doggerel Dave

        And therefore what else need to be said?
        Here’s a day complete unto itself.
        Also nothing there to do with pelf -
        It’s peace and tranquility you spread.

        • Goldfinch60

          So true Dave, as far as I am concerned every day is a good day as I got up once more into that day.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          Uplifting. you are living the life we all aspire to at your age,

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind d a, it is just the way I am.

            Andy

          • Fay Slimm.

            Reading your words makes each day with a loved one a treasure whether snowing or not - - I love the male choir and the number your chose too.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Fay, most kind. My lady is the Vice President of a Welsh Male Voice Choir.

              Andy

            • Bella Shepard

              What could be better at the end of each day than reflecting on how we spent it, and how fortunate to have had it. Beautifully written dear friend!

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Bella, thank you.

                Andy

              • orchidee

                Cooeee, Gold. How's the day been? Now a song - arrgghh! 'Now the day is over'.
                Sang it at Primary School, sometimes as a class before the school day ended. Probably started me off singing! heehee.

                • Goldfinch60

                  It has been another good day, as this one will as I am up once more.

                  Andy

                • orchidee

                  A friend invited me to a carol concert. he and his friend were singing in it. I could not make it. Just as well, as I may have started singing and ruined it for them! lol.



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