That Half-Smile

Fay Slimm.

 

That Half-Smile.


I catch somehow
the view 
of inside tears in eyes 
that peer 
forlornly from her
youthful brow.

Behind that half-smile
bravely 
shown for a camera
lens she stands 
denying pretence 
as 
all the while
endless 
rising red dust
surrounds the sound 
of home
falling, 
wall by broken wall,
but 
face it she must.

Homeless now, 
with age-old foresight
the girl  , 
with sobbing child 
becomes aware 

her world has stopped

for another bomb

has in error 

been dropped.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2022 08:44
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  • Neville

    no matter how thick the dust or smoke .. no matter what time of day or night it occurs .. there can be no mistaking that look, can there .. writ like a pro with a camera to hand .. sadly a little masterpiece is thus created ...... Neville x

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thank you mon ami....................x

    • orchidee

      Some will have to answer for this to a higher 'court' than humans - sooner or later. It has to be so surely, or there is no justice.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thanks for your thoughts on this subject dear Orchi.

      • dusk arising

        Your words once again bring home the sadness which fills us for these poor suffering peoples accross too much of our world. All in your words.

        • Fay Slimm.

          So much more needed than words to help the world see its insanity - - thank you for your in-put to my cry of lament dear Dusk

        • Bella Shepard

          A picture is truly worth a thousand words, but your words are so very important here. You give voice to one who can only bear consequences, and has no voice at all. Bravo dear Fay!

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thank you dear Bella for your considered comment . Such atrocities need now to be given attention with as many voices as can cry out for sense at the world's insanity .

          • Doggerel Dave

            Your picture and words combine to completely cover, and at the same time reveal the misery inflicted by humans one to the other, Fay. Can't say 'enjoyed', I will settle for 'valued'.
            Those of us privileged enough to exist in a state of security peace and tranquility should see ourselves as an exception, tragically.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Your comment adds thoughtful concern to a growing problem where innocents are sacrificed to the god of war Dave - - we are as you say obliged to see ourselves in more secure conditions than the picture I used to depict the misery so many suffering - -- how mad is humanity for destroying each other.

            • Goldfinch60

              Such empathy in your words and that picture Fay.

              Andy

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thank you Andy.

              • L. B. Mek

                'Behind that half-smile
                bravely
                shown for a camera
                lens she stands
                denying pretence'
                words that cut through pixels
                and ink out the true tragedies
                we've become numb to..
                such a poignant write dear Fay



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