If I should die before I finish this tale, please don't me bewail
It's been a most beautiful ride and I am totally satisfied
Although I've laughed and cried, I've had nothing to hide
I always knew that when it was through
Succeed or fail no more tickets would be for sale
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To have lived life well and fully is to be hoped for. When you can say that, you truly have all the riches of the world. Beautifully phrased dear friend.
Dear Bella thank you so much for your most kind words. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Well said soren but you will not be going yet you have too many more words to write.
Andy
Although I have just taken a trip to Brazil, I have not immediate plans for a trip to the great beyond. However, you never know and it is the illness's of some dear friends and fellow poets alike that spawned this write.
I fear we all have these scribbles
whether we voice them or not
that looming finite in our horizons
insures, we do
(a relatable wording, and cheers to you!
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thanks for sharing your wisdom, kind Poet)
Always a pleasure to hear from you L.B. Thank you so much for the review and your most generous words.
With such words time doesn't want to quit you, yet..
Thank you so much for your read and kind words
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