Our Path To Eternity.

Goldfinch60



The sun was shining down on us

As we walked by My River

On this Boxing Day morn,

The green of the river

Now coloured brown,

And its gentle way was rushing,

Rushing passed

As so much rain had fallen.

But there we were,

My Lover and I,

Walking at its side,

Our love flowing with the water.

The glory of My River

Enveloped us both

And we three became one

As we all walked our path,

Our path to eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 27th, 2022 02:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: It was a cool morning but we had a great walk with My River.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    I stepped up the pace too, on a Boxing Day walk. Bit nippy it was!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.
      Yes it was a bit fresh but never mind we survived.

      Andy

    • Neville



      what a smashing memory now pinned to this particular page for all eternity ..

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • Dr. Soma

        What a lovely feeling! I am just overwhelmed. Keep sharing.

        • Goldfinch60

          So kind Maya, thank you.

          Andy

        • BlessedbyGod

          Very beautiful Andy,

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Melissa, much appreciated.

            Andy



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