What a Bloody Waste

Neville

What a Bloody Waste

 

I don’t care what you say

she said ..

Just leave me alone to get

high in my

own head, so he did, and she

promptly

threw herself from a bridge ..

The driver she

hit, died there at the scene ..

All the

newspaper headlines say he

died instantly ..

While she, on the other hand

sits peeling grapes

while writing her memoirs in

an NHS

hospital bed somewhere ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2022 04:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: almost every single word of this little scribble is true .. and what makes it worse, is the fact I scribbled something very similar last year
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah - what a shocking and tragic account of growing numbers who attempt the same end and so often today bring it off - -except for those who live to tell their tale eh ? - -- I am left sighing deeply at your final lines Nev.

    • Neville



      Yes, sadly such acts of self determination are on the rise .. thanks for your understanding Fay x

    • Goldfinch60

      Such a sad tale Neville, has the lady been troubled after this?

      Andy

      • Neville



        I believe her to be something of a narcissist .. so she probably hasn't given it a second thought

      • Bella Shepard

        The tragic irony of this poem, is that it highlights the absurdity of life. Here is a prime example, well written dear friend.

        • Neville



          thank you Bella .. I have occasionally lost sleep wondering or worrying about what tomorrow might bring ..



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