A sensitive kid with a loving mother
beaten and tortured by the world
A curious nature and a daydreamer
Lived in a fantasy world but afraid of the dark
He fell in love once and had to fight the world
He doesn't know how he got the courage
He fought the battles for the one he loved
The battle seems never to end
it just gets bigger and bigger
He became great at fighting the outer world
but losing the war every second within himself
He kept going alone
He kept fighting alone
He never complaint about the pain
then someone came along
who understood him from the inside
she knew what's going on by just hearing his voice
She was always there for him
they celebrated the sunshine and rainbows
they had the best of times
He finally got his moment of joy
But the joy didn't last long, and
she was gone without saying a goodbye
He has suffered every single day since then
the spirit of fighting kept him alive
but It's time to move on and say goodbye.
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Comments3
I loved the flow of the poem really,
As words are flowing like waterfalls,
Whether she suddenly died and left
Or left abruptly by ditching him coolly?
I am fascinated by your language,
Clear, lucid with no bombastic words,
All the best to write more and more!
A great poem that shows the true reality of being heartbroken.
For me alone, I had enough know-how of the way you feel. I've been once in that situation like you're now. Thanks for the memory.
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