When We Were Hot

Neville

When We Were Hot

 

Even though, I know

that nothing

lasts for ever and

one day I shall

have to let you go ..

For now,

and maybe for

a moment longer ..

I just want

the whole damn

world to know

you were, once mine ..

And my word,

how we did then shine ..

Both hot

and furnace bright ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 31st, 2022 00:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.

    • Neville



      they were indeed kinda special .. thank you dearly, dear Fay .. x

    • Goldfinch60

      Those days will never be forgotten Neville.

      Andy

      • Neville



        lets hope not .. cheers Andy

      • orchidee

        Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.

        • Neville



          Have a good one Steven ..

        • arqios

          The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.

          • Neville



            absolutely ...... cheers cb 🙂

          • Bella Shepard

            "Hot and furnace bright", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.

            • Neville



              thank you Bella & may 2023 be filled with all good things .. Neville

            • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

              Nice writing .. especially like the last line ‘ furnace bright ‘ that’s lovely

              • Neville



                thank you VB & a happy new year to you & all those you love and hold dear

              • L. B. Mek

                'And my word,
                how we did then shine ..
                Both hot
                and furnace bright ..'
                (tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
                with the trails of our realised dreams
                oh how we did fly, high
                scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
                absolutely loved your poem Hyung
                thank you!

                • Neville



                  you clearly got me brother M & boy do I thank you my friend ........ tis good to have you back .. Neville



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