When We Were Hot
Even though, I know
that nothing
lasts for ever and
one day I shall
have to let you go ..
For now,
and maybe for
a moment longer ..
I just want
the whole damn
world to know
you were, once mine ..
And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..
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Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.
they were indeed kinda special .. thank you dearly, dear Fay .. x
Those days will never be forgotten Neville.
Andy
lets hope not .. cheers Andy
Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.
Have a good one Steven ..
The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.
absolutely ...... cheers cb ๐
"Hot and furnace bright", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.
thank you Bella & may 2023 be filled with all good things .. Neville
Nice writing .. especially like the last line โ furnace bright โ thatโs lovely
thank you VB & a happy new year to you & all those you love and hold dear
'And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..'
(tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
with the trails of our realised dreams
oh how we did fly, high
scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
absolutely loved your poem Hyung
thank you!
you clearly got me brother M & boy do I thank you my friend ........ tis good to have you back .. Neville
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