The Most Perfect Love

Neville

The Most Perfect Love

 

how he loved the way she

always tried

to manipulate the swell ..

and of course

the way she rode the ever

undulating tide ..

and how she wore him like

a bespoke glove ..

then used him, as a template

to always

make the most perfect love ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 1st, 2023 03:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Happy New Year, to One & All
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  • orchidee

    Sounds like me and KP - nearly?! lol.

    • Neville



      like I said before, you're nuts sir 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.

      • Neville



        thanking you muchly my dear Fay this New Years day 🙂 x

      • Bella Shepard

        As the song says "Love is a many Splendored thing", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

        • Neville



          thanking you muchly too dear Bella 🙂 x

        • Goldfinch60

          May that love remain perfect Neville,

          Andy

          • Neville



            a nice thought Andy .. cheers

          • L. B. Mek

            'manipulate
            undulating
            bespoke
            template'
            just wonderfully worded
            (if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
            they've got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
            lol
            thanks for sharing Hyung

            • Neville



              Bless you for considering them so favourably my friend .. Neville



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