The Most Perfect Love
how he loved the way she
always tried
to manipulate the swell ..
and of course
the way she rode the ever
undulating tide ..
and how she wore him like
a bespoke glove ..
then used him, as a template
to always
make the most perfect love ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Happy New Year, to One & All
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Sounds like me and KP - nearly?! lol.
like I said before, you're nuts sir 🙂
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.
thanking you muchly my dear Fay this New Years day 🙂 x
As the song says "Love is a many Splendored thing", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
thanking you muchly too dear Bella 🙂 x
May that love remain perfect Neville,
Andy
a nice thought Andy .. cheers
'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they've got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung
Bless you for considering them so favourably my friend .. Neville
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