New Wine From Old Vines
Like new wine, from old vines
our love has survived
the most cruellest of winters ..
Yet our hunger
and our appetites are now each
truly sated ..
While here, side by side, we shall
still lay for always ..
Safe, warm and so very contented ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2023 05:24
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Good write N.
Right good then O. 🙂
Such a beautiful way to say love never grows old. That fine, mellow wine warms and intoxicates in the very best way. Thank you for this lovely image!
thank you for visiting my latest little scribble and blessing it in such a generous way ..
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots young love will flourish again. I am taken with every line of your chosen metaphor mon ami. First class writing,.
what a lovely comment Fay .. I am delighted truly and then some .. x
It’s natural……
Romantically composed!
Bless you my friend .. & here's wishing you a contented and healthy 2023 🙂
Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷
Andy
do want to keep the same tankard or would you prefer a pint glass this time 🙂
'indeed
we must first survive our winter's, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life's warming mulled wine, mementos'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)
Thank you so very bloomin much for indulging me this mane Mek .. believe me, I would linger and try to articulate how grateful both me & Amelie's mum are .. but two things keep getting in the way .. the lack of time and my current clinic that feels fit to burst .................. AGT's & then some N
Sweet, felt the cool, warmth of its Beauty
Reynaldo
How extraordinarily kind, thank you so very much Reynaldo .. I am delighted you felt able to breathe fresh life into my old scribble .. Neville
Your welcome Neville
Its cool, really enjoed it
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